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SiniStarR
08-13-2009, 04:24 PM
We are proud to introduces the MANN CO. POTATOS. These IMPORTED potatoes, from an UNKNOWN REGION, are MACHINE picked just for YOU!


This MANN CO. POTATO SACK PACK comes with:
-50lb. Potatobag
-POTATOS
http://i628.photobucket.com/albums/uu7/SiniStar/PotatoSacks/potatoeng2.jpg



Many "MIS-INFORMED consumers" have noticed that potatoes is "spelled" incorrectly. Well you know what we here at MANN CO. have to say about that?

These are MANN CO. POTATOS! PUNCTUATION IS NOT ALLOWED!

http://i628.photobucket.com/albums/uu7/SiniStar/PotatoSacks/potatoeng3.jpghttp://i628.photobucket.com/albums/uu7/SiniStar/PotatoSacks/potatoeng5.jpg


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This is a revamped potato model. I tip my hat to Acumen and Cerulean for their help with the textures. I owe you guys!

The pack includes the empty bulk potato bag, single potatoes and grouped potatoes to put inside the potato bag.

I made the grouped potatoes separate so you can place them at any height in the bag and so that bag could be used for things besides potatoes. Be creative!

Need a smoke? MANN CO. POTATOS, THE ULTIMATE substitute.
http://i628.photobucket.com/albums/uu7/SiniStar/PotatoSacks/potatoeng51.jpg

Terr
08-13-2009, 05:29 PM
Maybe a bit late now, but... "Potatoes".

Dr. ROCKZO
08-14-2009, 01:01 AM
Is it me or are those Potato sacks not looking very much like sacks that carry lumpy, large potatoes?..

A Boojum Snark
08-14-2009, 01:04 AM
Yeah, they are pretty flat and "panel-y" :(

Acumen
08-14-2009, 03:12 AM
yeh, you gotta bulk/Scale them up a bit, like here:

http://www.thegardenersshop.co.uk/ekmps/shops/thegardeners/images/hessian_sack_10.jpg

http://wwwdelivery.superstock.com/WI/223/1558/PreviewComp/SuperStock_1558-013562.jpg

http://www.toadstool.org.uk/images/potato%20sack.jpg

right now, they look like i cut put in a A4-letter or something to deliever :o

BULK them potato sacks up !!! just some scaling here and there and you're good to go. nothing should be that square in the tf2-world ;)

SiniStarR
08-14-2009, 07:50 AM
yay i strive on feedback thanks for the suggestions, ill remove the download for not until I improve the design.

I wasn't too sure on it myself so this is good.

Zeewier
08-14-2009, 07:59 AM
And it would look better if you added some shadows to the texture :)

Vigilante212
08-14-2009, 12:15 PM
also texture is a bit too uniform. needs some detailing a bit.

SiniStarR
08-14-2009, 12:44 PM
there were shadows i think its just light positioning.

As for textures, im not a very good at doing textures. I couldn't believe i managed what i already did in photoshop. I do agree though it does look too uniform and such. I guess I can keep trying unless someone would be willing to help me make the texture (hint hint)

Acumen
08-14-2009, 12:53 PM
did you try using an ambient occlusion map as a base ?
i'm always making one when texturing my models and i think valve pretty much did bake most of the lighting in their props as well. often its even just flat colored.
but just from the looks of it, i think its safe to say that pretty much every model has an ambient occlusion beneath its texture.

Void
08-14-2009, 06:39 PM
Your MANN CO. WRITING sucks worse than your ENEMY'S MOTHER.

SiniStarR
09-02-2009, 06:33 PM
Rereleased the Mann Co. Potatoes. Thanks Acumen and Cerulean!

Terr
09-02-2009, 07:15 PM
Is this...MON DIEU! Has that sniper no shame at all!?
http://i628.photobucket.com/albums/uu7/SiniStar/PotatoSacks/potatoeng5.jpg

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Mann Potatoes. Their starchy goodness is only surpassed by their ability to bludeon your foes.

Midel
09-02-2009, 09:42 PM
http://i628.photobucket.com/albums/uu7/SiniStar/PotatoSacks/potatoeng5.jpgMann Potatoes. Their starchy goodness is only surpassed by their ability to bludeon your foes.Did some one forget to let Red Dog out again?

Terr
09-02-2009, 11:02 PM
Our intelligence agencies have startling news. RED's genetics lab has a prototype engineered bioweapon which they are preparing to field-test.

The only details we managed to get before our agent was discovered was this photo and a code name... "Clifford".

SiniStarR
09-02-2009, 11:26 PM
what is going on?! XD

Acumen
09-03-2009, 10:43 AM
i think they should be a bit brighter, so they spread more potato love all around !
these bad people claim it looks like poo i guess :D

anyways, it's great you released this model and move on now. that's how you learn things and improve. just keep the crits in mind and make another model, and so on !!

A Boojum Snark
09-03-2009, 10:49 AM
It looks like poo because the oval shapes intersect each other and appear to be mushed into one. You would need to keep them all uhh... "touching"?

Terr
09-03-2009, 01:09 PM
At this point I guess it's nitpicking (but it's so fun!) but what Boojum said: Less overlapping would help with the scatalogical angle.

Hey, are they phong-shaded like the models? Perhaps if they were individually blotchier. Ex:
http://www.bridgendallotment.org.uk/wiki/uploads/Main/Potatos.jpg

Engineer
09-03-2009, 01:14 PM
That sniper made a...

Cerulean
09-03-2009, 03:25 PM
Lol scatalogical....

But anyways, I would expect to see these in-map being in close proximity to the word "potatos".

YM
09-03-2009, 03:43 PM
This is what a pile of potatoes looks like
http://www.ghuset.se/Sanna/pile%20potatoes.jpg

Just for reference ;)

Fragimus_Max
09-03-2009, 03:44 PM
Maybe Milky can use those potatoes for one of his cow maps.

But for a pile of something that "resembles" a potato. :)

SiniStarR
09-03-2009, 03:45 PM
*sigh/facepalm*

That picture was just to show you what it looks like, it's wasn't exactly intended to be used to just sit on the ground like that XD thats why I made the individual potato.

As for coloring...idk, I think it looks alright in the sack and if it's used as detail I dont think people are going to be distracted by the color of the potatoes since it's color isnt exactly outrageous when comparing it to the rest of the model.. Thats my opinion anyways.

Dr. ROCKZO
09-24-2009, 11:17 PM
Well it's coming along now, can I get a little map made for these with a light beam on them or something? just to get an Idea for proportions, texture, that sort of thing as I am away from Hammer currently.

SiniStarR
09-28-2009, 12:31 AM
Well it's coming along now, can I get a little map made for these with a light beam on them or something? just to get an Idea for proportions, texture, that sort of thing as I am away from Hammer currently.

what...?