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EArkham

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I hate haikus.

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This looks pretty great, but you lost me at the stock. It seems to be curved like a cane for the sake of curving like a cane.

I'd suggest giving it a more traditional stock with the cannister below it, then adding a metal hook (taped or bolted on) if you really want to give it that shape.

Ditto on what Huckle said; that bolt action doesn't look like it'd work.
 

Pocket

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Needs smaller numbers. Also, some of the words could use tighter kerning. An easy fix is to set the character spacing to "Optical" if you're using Photoshop.
 

Seba

DR. BIG FUCKER, PHD
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I don't like the glow on the gun. If you made it a bit darker it should be fine.
 

lana

Currently On: ?????
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Gerbil: Sniper now has 5 Rifle replacements.

Please, think of the children. Think of the Demoman.

Nerd: Looks flat as hell, with lots of long choke-y/sightline-y paths to the point, and no cover.

You're bad at looking.

Thus far
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grazr

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